1.eedless to say HAPPY BIRTHDAY, our life is quiteormal. And boring. But We like it like that. Adventure is dangerous. And the danger is just asking for trouble. We woke up this morning tired, but a little excited. Today was Saturday and the sun was shining, translucent glass from our window. Right when We was done, brushing teeth and crawled back into bed, someone knocked on our door. "Come in" We called when We for the remote on our bedside table. our mother walked into our room, with a broad smile. "Good morning, Luna." They cheered, sat down in a chair in front of our mirror. "Tomorrow." We muttered as We turned on the TV. We were both silent as We moved through the channels. "Well." She muttered. We stayed in the food channel, to finally look at her. Her black hair was pinned into a bun and
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